Editorial Reviews. About the Author. Lauren Burd is a wife and mother of two, a boy age 9 and a girl age 4. Immortal is the first book of the series, and she is. Immortal Trilogy (3 Book Series) by Lauren Burd. All Formats Kindle Edition. From Book 1: The wound inflicted only a few minutes before was nearly healed. Eternity (Immortal Trilogy) [Lauren Burd] on *FREE* shipping on qualifying offers. “We’re just beginning the lesson for today. It’s on crime and.
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I couldn’t bring myself to finish the last 40 pages of this book. The last thing that irked me was the ending. There were a few hiccups along the way that pulled me out of the story.
I would be able to look past the wholes in the story if in the next book they were filled in. Sometimes I do like a good love triangle but it has to be carefully worked not to give the wrong impression about the protagonist, which unfortunatelly is the case with Alina, or at least that’s how I saw it.
The leads are suitably hot, even if a little carbon copied.
The story either skipped big parts leaving you confused or it dragged on and left you begging for it to end!
Also her relationship with Tabby isn’t defined as I would have liked.
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He then gives her the background on both himself and Samuel, thereby also revealing Samuel’s secret. Then there was the part about needing to bite someone in order to infect them with the virus that makes them immortal.
There were many undeveloped parts of the story.
Alter immorta, also fighting for the girl. Share your thoughts with other customers. Scion of Midnight Daizlei Academy Book 2. Dec 20, Wendy rated it did not like it Shelves: I watched in disbelief as it finished closing and eventually disappeared. Gods, demons and vampires, I clicked buy. She’s there for 2 seconds in the book and she doesn’t bring anything to the storyline. I can understand lust or a crush, a hope that it would develop into more, even a false love brought on the unresistable attraction the Immortals cause.
OK – it starts off, a as a cross between Vampire Diaries and Twilight – and actually it keeps it’s Twilight feeling throughout I thought – However with that immorta, it’s got a solid twist that’d decidedly Imortal Twilight-esk at all Honestly, I feel like if the author took a little more tie developing Samuel’s character, maybe I would pick him over Duncan.
On her first day of class, the guy from the plane bkrd next to her. The style is very subtle – blink a thousand times and you miss it – but it’s there, which is why I think I kept turning pages even though laursn story wasn’t blowing my socks off.
Maybe that will be in book two. Want to Read saving…. The main character, Alina, meets two boys, both extremely handsome, but as different as night and day. Most helpful customer reviews on Amazon.
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Yes, brd where some misspellings but it didn’t affect my reading this book. For the rest of you? It seems this book is the mesh burs 3 other equally rubbish books, the formula is as follows; 2 guys, one amazingly stupid girl who has the most annoying inferiority complex i have ever seenvampires, bad guys, ‘if you loved me you would make me immortal too’ said in a whinny girl voice crap and finally the cliff hanger that will allow this to go on for at least 5 more books!!!!
Unlike the first half of the book, I felt like I was finally seeing HER world, and with that came a completely original and smack-worthy cliffhanger. A Touch of Deadly. The story immortap straightforward, easy to understand and written well. I felt next to no connection with any character. For the rest of you? Immortal was enjoyable for a light read with some fun and danger thrown in.
First our main character Alina. I kept reading this book waiting for something to happen. I read on the authors profile page she seems to have a writers block. Similarities in names ex: I could not care less if she ended up with Samuel or Duncan. Even thought I felt like alot like New Moon I could see alot of potential in it.
Page 1 of 1 Start over Page 1 of 1. The style Reading this was like eating Hershey’s chocolate instead of Cadbury’s.
However, the more I read, the more I began to see the story as it’s own. In return she is also very protective of them.
The technical problems could be fixed by even an English teacher, leaving a merely mediocre story. I will read the next book when it comes out. Dec 29, Becky rated it it was ok. She is just entering adulthood. Mainly the relationship between Butd and Samuel. I’m sure it will go from a 2 star to a 4. Mar 12, Navdha rated it did not like it Shelves: Whether intentionally or not, this book was a copy of Twilight, and, sadly, not as well done.